Final Darft

Slum is happening in places of the world and we don't even know and we don't do anything about it. Slum is a nasty word for the poor people where they live is a place that is really poor and very disgusting. If we lived in slum there would be non- recycled items in the floor wherevere we go, we would have houses that don't have supporting roofs and are falling down, and there would be trash everywhere on the floor being uncared for.

There would be non-recycled items in the ground. Items are being dumped all over the ground. "It's littered with refuse, too: plastic bags; glass bottles." Items that can be recycled are being dumped on rivers, lakes and more places contaminating them. These causes aren't being taken good cared of in order to decrease slum. If we lived in slum we would have houses with non-supporting roofs and they would be falling down.

Houses would be falling apart and some wouldn't have roofs that protect you from anything falling on top of you. Some people loose their houses due to not being warned about them loosing their homes. "They knocked down our shanty, saying that they wanted to build better houses, and they said that this shanty was a source of insecurity." Houses are being lost and property is being taken away. People are being fooled about getting their houses repaired but instead they get them taken away. If we lived in slum there would be trash everywhere on the floor being uncared of.

 Trash would be everywhere you go, you'll see it on the trees, lakes, rivers; on the park everywhere there would be trash. There would be human waste outside houses."It's a collection of what's known in slum vernacular as "flying toilets"- fimsy bags filled with human waste." People that don't have toilets in their houses put their human waste in a plastic bag and put it outside the front door of their house. People dont have working toilets so they do what they do. All of these causes are the effects of slum that are cause to us.

Slum is happening in places of the world and don't even know and we don't do anything about it. If we lived in slum there would be non-recycled items on the floor wherever we go, we would have houses that don't have supporting roofs and are falling down, and there would be trash everywhere on the floor being uncared for. These problems can be stopped if we all gather together and stop it. so think about next time you want to kill the planet think of other people from different places of the world.

 

Rough Draft

Slums is happening in places of the world and don't even know and we don't do anything about it. Slum is a nasty word for the poor people where they live is a place that is really poor and very disgusting. If we lived in slum there would be non-recycled items on the floor wherever we go, we would have houses that don't have supporting roofs and are falling down, and there would be trash everywhere on the floor being uncared for.

There would be non-recycled items in the ground. Trash is being dumped all over the ground. "It's littered with refuse, too : plastic bags, glass bottles."  Items that can be recycled are being dump on rivers, lakes and more places contaminating them. These causes aren't being taken good care of in order to decrease slum. If we lived in slum we would have houses with non-supporting roofs and they would be falling down.

Houses would be falling apart and some wouldn't have roofs that protect you from anything falling on top of you. Some people loose their houses due to not being warned about them loosing their homes. "They knocked down our shanty, saying that they wanted to build better houses, and they said that this shanty was a source of insecurity. " Houses are being lost and property is being taken away. People are being fooled about getting their houses repaired but instead they get them taken away. If we lived in slum there trash everywhere on the floor being uncared of.

Trash would be everywhere you go, you'll see it on the trees, lakes, rivers; on the park everywhere there would be trash. There would be human waste outside houses."It's a collection of what's known in slum vernacular as "flying toilets"- fimsy bags filled  with human waste." People that don't have toilets in their houses put their human waste in a plastic bag and put it outside the front door of their house. People dont have working toilets so they do what they do. All of these causes are the effects of slum that are cause to us.

Slum is happening in places of the world and don't even know and we don't do anything about it.  If we lived in slum there would be non-recycled items on the floor wherever we go, we would have houses that don't have supporting roofs and are falling down, and there would be trash everywhere on the floor being uncared for. These problems can be stopped if we all gather together and stop it. so think about next time you want to kill the planet think of other people from different places of the world.

Intro Paragraph

Slums, what can I say about it it's very disgusting and unpreferred. If we lived in slum our world would be a total mess and would be really different there would be a total big amount of un-recycled items on the floor, homeless and ugly houses; and there would be trash everywhere we go we'll see trash on the floor uncared for.

My Outline

Intro: Slums, what can I say about it; it's very disgusting thing for the world.
If we lived in slum, there would be un-recycled items on the ground, homeless and ugly houses, and there would be trash everywhere.
II. There would be un-recycled items that are on the ground.
A. Trash isn't dispose of properly the way it should be.
B. People don't recycle items to save more items.
i. " Paper, bottles would be seen everywhere you go".
C. It's important to recycle so we can make new stuffs.
D. The worst is the houses that people live in.

III. There would be horrible; and homeless houses where the people live.
A. The houses that the people live in are all falling to pieces, they aren't clean and don't have bathrooms.
B. People struggle when they are living in these houses.
i. "It's a living hell living in these horrible houses.
ii. The houses give a bad and tough life to the people who live in them.
C. People can't afford to pay for a well constructed house.
D. Please help us construct better and economical houses for these people.

V. Conclusion
A. People you don't want slum to come and hit the world or do we.
B. All  of these causes is the reason why slum happens in some parts of the world.
C. Slum will cause all of these problems to come to our world and then well be struggling.
D. So think about it do you really want slum to hit us and be struggling to find clean water, to walk in a dirty park who was once clean; then think about it help the earth from becoming the SLUM.....

Thesis Statement

If we lived in a slum our life's would be miserable and disgusting. There would be dirty, polluted lakes and the water we drink would be dirt, the world would be a mess due to all trash it has on it that has been littered, and people would be starving and have horrible homes.